This line melted my heart. Such a sweet ending to the poem. Very well done, Brian.

I can’t extend this art across to you.
My meters and rhymes do less than
a cup of coffee ready when you wake,
less than taking your hand when we cross
a busy street, less than a smiling wordless 
“I love you.”
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Brian S. Hook
kasey sparks
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Jun 25, 2024
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This line melted my heart. Such a sweet ending to the poem. Very well done, Brian.
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